Tuesday, July 10, 2018

Restraint Comments

Rating: ★5.0

He is all about subtleties -
Half smiles, off-whites on cinco de mayo;
He gets around with restraint,
A sneaky shadow in a crowd!
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Melanie Emikohe
sunset
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Vincent LeVine 10 July 2018

Spot on

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 July 2018

They are vivid like scarlet on sand, Then another shot of Sunset Rum! ... very fine poem.. subtle and expressive.. tony

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Melanie Emiko 10 July 2018

Thank you!

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 July 2018

nicely penned - They are vivid like scarlet on sand, Then another shot of Sunset Rum! .... pointless breath or the breath into thyself the earth is rounding one sip of RUM or lovelorn mourn! ! !

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Melanie Emiko 10 July 2018

Thank you Mahtab.

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Melanie Emiko 10 July 2018

Gracias Mahtab.

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Melanie Emikohe

Philippines
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Philippines
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