Restrain Me Comments
Restrain me because I want to bathe in your sun
I want a southern moon to shiver on you
from the naked shadows, I'd be casting all over you.
Restrain me; I'm like an applecart toppled over
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A sensational appealing poem, romantic and brill in phrasings. Kudos! ! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, ' squash the hate hate bug'
A sensational appealing poem wow. Romantic and brill in poetic phrasing. Kudos! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, ' squash the hate hate bug' g
a beautiful and passionate poem of love and appreciation for one's soulmate. Thank you Mark for stoping by my page to read my poem. wish you a happy holidays.
'like an applecart toppled over'- that could be a long poem starting in and of itself!
Beautiful love poem written with clarity of thought and mind. Lovely and passionate rendition. Thanks for sharing Mark.
Congratulations! This is a nice poem on this poem of the day. Having bath in rays of sun in tenderness core of heart is shown in this poem with affection to all readers. An Excellent poem this is beautifully penned...10
So very kind of you, Kumarmani, thank you Sir for all your kindness. :)
Congratulations for the well deserved 'Poem of the Day' Mark. The poem describes such deep passion and intense desire. I adore: 'Restrain me; I'm like an apple cart toppled over Soon, I will be showing you the core of my heart' This really grabbed my attention and imagination...what a passionate vision this evoked...10+
The horizon that lights up! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This is what I would term a POEM OF PASSION. The image of the apple cart toppling over to show the core of the heart struck me as original. I enjoyed that. Congrats on poem of the day! Thanks for sharing Mark.
Thank you, Jette, I am please you think it has something original within those lines. :)
This is a beautiful poem love the images used. Congratulations Mark for poem of the day place.
A poem bathed with intense love and delicate illuminations. Congrats Mark for the POTD.
This is beautiful poetry and Congrats for being chosen as the poet of the day.
Beautiful poem touching the intensity of love. Loved reading it. Congratulations on member poem of the day!
a poem about trying to control one's true love feelings? ............wonderfully written Mark
Congratulations Mark Heathcote for being selected as Poet of the Day.
Love and its intensity has been expressed so nicely in this poem.It touches up on love as soft illumination to full passion.Love is a warm feeling, but if unrestrained can burn you.
Such a well-penned poem, Mark... congrats for being chosen....a perfect 10+++++
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In words and imagery this poem draws an intense and passionate picture of love! Congratulations Mark Heathcote for this poem being selected as the Poem of the Day!