Restlessness Comments

Such a nice poem, Shameem. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

Good one... O heart don't narrate story of agony to anyone We ll get intelligent judgement of everyone I love that line. Bravo!

I am a wanderer in my heart/Let me leave aside my worries I liked this line.Thank you for sharing.

Stranger to restlessness... Must be nice! !

Nice poem.... Truly said this world is restless... The root is our selfishness causing worries. It can be healed only by a loving which is hard to find.

thank ya all for your lovely comment

You are a most talented poet with high skill. keep writing.

You are a most talented poet with high skill. keep writing.

.........very nice....I enjoyed this lovely write....thanks for sharing with me :)

A beautiful poem................

In his comment Rajnish Manga writes Ya to Diwana hanse, yaa tu jise taufiq de Varna is duniya me Aa ke muskurata kaun hai Shamim means fragrance and Hyder is the tile of Hazrat Ali. So you are fragrance of Ali and Ali says miseries that bring you closer to God are to examine you and miseries that move you away of God are the curses. Your beautiful poem shows you have come closer to God so you are being examined. I hope and pray you will get through it. Your poem is really nice...............10

A poem of serious thoughts and desires. An unsettled mind is full of restlessness. Will calm down soon. Nice.

Beautiful poem. It brings about glimpses of desperate thoughts going on in one's mind. This reminds me of an Urdu couplet: Ya to Diwana hanse, yaa tu jise taufiq de Varna is duniya me Aa ke muskurata kaun hai या तो दीवाना हँसे, या तू जिसे तौफ़ीक़ दे वरना इस दुनिया में आ कर मुस्कुराता कौन है