Saturday, June 9, 2007

Restless Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is a known phenomenon,
A universal state,
When everything's turned upside down
And dumped upon your plate;
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Linda Ori
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Marilyn Lott 27 June 2007

I have been told I can write a poem about anything and I'll bet you can too. I enjoyed that! Marilyn

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Well if this is how you write when you DON'T have inspiration... a jealous full marks from me! ! ! ! :) t x

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Ted Sheridan 10 June 2007

Writing is like exercise....you have to keep doing it.

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Alison Cassidy 09 June 2007

Linda this is a wonderful piece - honest, clever, unselfconscious and rhythmical. You hold up your poetic mirror for the rest of us to see ourselves. Don't know what he said, but goodonya Mr. Ryan for inspiring this. love, Allie xxxx

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Chuck Audette 09 June 2007

Good for Frank to get you writing. This piece has great flow/meter! -c

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You are most welcome Lady Midnight! ...But trust me...this piece, as all your work, is there within you always...there is nothing i can say or do to make it happen unless you want it with your heartbreath...And you did, and so you wrote...and we are pleasured, once again! Great Crafting, young lady! .. And thank you for the dedicational....again you humble me... FjR

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