Thursday, August 7, 2008

Restless Souls Comments

Rating: 4.8

staring at a bright screen
into the early hours
where restless souls gather in the night
to talk about their sorrows and their plight
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christopher murphy
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Linda Ori 05 June 2009

Lucky for us that you typed this poem on that bright screen for all of us to ponder. Yes, it's a sad existence for many who get caught up in the drama of other people's lives online, but unfortunately, it's becoming a way of life. You make a valid point here, Chris. Well done! Linda :)

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Tanya Stanford 30 August 2008

Very good and the last sentance is very impactful for it symbolises your need to face reality and not ponder on all the bad

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