Thursday, September 17, 2009

Restless Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

I realise I'm not alone....
yet isolated and distant I feel from you.
Your touch no longer ignites me,
instead I feel remorse and sadness.
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Tracey TEE
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Astrid Eckstein 10 July 2013

I SO hear you- excellent poem sister!

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Shashendra Amalshan 29 September 2009

Yes.. I agree with Karin ma'am.. you write from the heart... I feel emotions oozing out through this peice of work. this is very well written.. Touched my heart, and i know it kinda helps the mind too, when we let the emotions out..10 with love shan

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This is what poetry is all about, getting it down in words which at least gives some release of emotions held tightly within the heart. I am sure most poets can relate to this poem, which you have written with skill. 10 love Karin

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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 September 2009

Take it from me... this feeling can last for a long time. Write about it.

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Stephen Magill 17 September 2009

great poem. sometimes i wish i could erase the hurt but not at the expense of losing the joy.

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Rakesh Bedi 17 September 2009

Yeah, it has the aura of a restless soul, tracey.....! Memories are memories. What can one do of them, dear? ? ?

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