Friday, January 10, 2014

Restless Comments

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Restless
That's what I am
The girl that never sleeps
I walk the nights,
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Molly O'Shaunessy
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 06 May 2014

unique and very well done...

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Marcus Mckinley 10 January 2014

a good start. quick and easy to read. a few grammer fixes line 10, line 12,13 =happened (or remove the word [have] in line 12) . keep writting

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John Long 10 January 2014

It's good, for a first. It seems vary Irish, too. I think, you were inspired!

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Gajanan Mishra 10 January 2014

I am the girl who never sleeps, good one, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Gajanan Mishra 10 January 2014

I am the girl who never sleeps, good one, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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