Good poem. Very thoughtful. It's a rat race. I like it. Pls read mine and comment
poem well flowed to the ending flawless. rhyming words used suitably Read mine and comment please. Thank u
Toheeb, I felt your fatigue and struggle, while your words also stirred a sense of pain from the weight of the strife lived by one so young. Keep your eyes on the horizon...you will go far!
Your message is great, Toheeb.So, romantic you are about life! The manner in which you wrote the poem is unique.Just unique!
Not many poets write like you, gentle words but weighty. This is a grt write Toyeeb, looking forward to reading more like it.
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7/20/2025 1:47:37 AM # 1.0.0
A very good poem written at midnight without light..... just wonderful. thoughts, future, worries, joys, pains.... all are reflected here in this poem. thank you very much. tony