Tuesday, April 25, 2006

Resting Place Comments

Rating: 4.5

Among the birches
in a field away from man,
is a small grave yard
holding my history
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Joyce Chelmo
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Gregory Gunn 01 May 2006

Joyce, you chose the proper tone for this particular subject and your beauty as a human shines through in those words. A sense of calm came over me after reading this charmer. Kudos, Red. Warmest regards, Greg

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Hugh Cobb 26 April 2006

Dear Red, This is beautifully written. It is a very personal piece and communicated with clear, clean writing, strong images and great love and respect for your family and its traditions. D(amn) F(ine) W(riting) ! Best, Hugh

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Duncan Wyllie 25 April 2006

And the poet who stands with a lamp of poetry even in the graveyard, a light of love for us to see, Love Duncan

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