Resting Awhile Count 2-5-8-3 (Hb) (Revised) Comments

~Killing me softly with his song Killing me softly with his song Telling my whole life with his words Killing me softly with his song~ Roberta Flack - Killing me Softly

A lovely gentle poem with a great message.

In silence, we are able to lay our souls bare before Him and we are filled with a serene tranquillity! This poem provides a soothing feel! !

it gives soothing effect on mind and heart it is your rest and for me reset

Nice tempo maintained in the poem. Thank you.

The rhythm of this poem and its succint form is like a whispered wish.

Heather concluding has killed me lovely like arrow that pierce only heart

An aweinspirin freeverse, whether u wake or u rest u do wondrs pal. Hugs n :)

A chamber of silence sounds just the thing, a great poem.