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Rating: 4.5

When things
Go bad
And I go
Slipping down
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Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi
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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 February 2015

Nicely composed. Words choice is very good. Thanks for sharing.

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Jak Black 01 February 2015

Quite darkness Is all That I long.................................. I think you meant Quiet darkness. Always enjoy reading your pieces Nalini. Unlike some, your writing seems to be effortless. You always have a story or message. And nothing Matters.................I read on this site recently a little pearl of wisdom. Can't remember the (poet?) name. He wrote Everything matters, even ant matter matters. For some reason this little pearl stuck in my mind.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 31 January 2015

Simple, flowing, with good imagery. You have a knack with your words. I have rated this.

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