Saturday, October 4, 2014

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A boy got his electric train, (I think a Lionel)
And then he did an awful thing (this tale is sad to tell)
He took his sister's Barbie doll and laid her on the track,
Then ran the engine over her, first forward and then back.
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Robert Eckstein
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Howard Savage 11 January 2016

Great poem of emotions and the experience of a lost. Great writing.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 04 October 2014

After two shots Joe took a fall...........nice story.

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Gajanan Mishra 04 October 2014

good writing, thanks, I like it.

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