Thursday, May 29, 2008

Rest In Peace Comments

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Rest in peace. well how am I suppose to sleep? My eyes were kissed, and they layed me down to sleep. My lips were sealed but died by poison. My tears were dried, but I still cried. My body was paralized, but my feet were six feet under. Where am I? I do not know. I'm in the depths of hell.

By: Kelsey Barnet
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Bonnie Collins 29 May 2008

Just thought you might want to use the word Peace rather than piece, , , , , Good structure.....

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