Friday, September 27, 2013
Rest Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Under the grassy mossy blanket - Rest
Tearing searing pain can never again
Touch your brief brightly burning brilliance
You are locked in Earth's sheltered embrace - Rest
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Elia Michael
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Khairul Ahsan
27 September 2013
A beautiful poem, free flowing words emanating from the poet's heart, touch those of others.10/10.
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7/27/2025 9:34:08 AM # 1.0.0
I am assuming this requiem is for a dearly departed fiend or family member. I enjoyed the repetition of rest in the first and last stanza at the first and forth lines and the use of 4 lines per stanza and the use of 3 stanzas with the 4 seasons comprising the middle stanza. Symbolic of the seasons of life and the 3 stanzas indicative of the 3 stages of life as youth, mature and old age. A finely crafted piece.