Sunday, June 19, 2011

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I have drifted on a lake of sorrow,
unwilling to take that deep dive in.
I may float here just a little longer,
and put my feet just slightly in....
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Haley Akin
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Juan Olivarez 30 June 2011

You know, your husband may be biased, but he's right, you can write well. Another ten.

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Biff Mcguire 29 June 2011

Simple rythmic verse, testing lifes water before going in over your head. Keep writing!

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