RESURRECTION
As you hold out your hand to touch me
In tune with your breath that my name doth quietly spell
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my gratitude to all my esteemed readers who have appreciated this poem....THANKS POEM HUNTER
Where the streaming blood sings of a new Spring, Your words in my soul Always like a sacred hymn do ring. a great poem, great wording and imagination. fine poem indeed. tony
Your looks surround me like a python-Wonderful use of simile! Congrats for this beautiful poem being chosen as POD!
A stunning write - - - - -words of passion flow so nicely- - -Let me quote a few lines- - - - - - - You are the taste of a monsoon-soaked secret breath That stirs seeds from long Summer death You are my burns, my bruises My hymn and my silent noises, my salvation and my faith. Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day.
Greate poem with some unique images. My bones clank like impatient Baisakhi blown temple bells....Congratulations for member poem place.
'Your looks surround me like a python' A powerful image and the link with the snake and resurrection
Congrats on being poet of the day! Quite a passionate poem, I must say, with the use of strong words like python, streaming blood, etc. Love of this sort is a scary emotion indeed...
nicely penned- like to quote a stanza- Your looks surround me like a python Around a supple body at the high-tech health spa Where the streaming blood sings of a new Spring, Your words in my soul Always like a sacred hymn do ring;
Saroj, such an uplifting poem of the day... congrats for being chosen....10+++++
An excellent poem with an appropriate title and graphic. The metaphors too are unique. I've liked this poem very much and rated it 10/10. 'You are my burns, my bruises My hymn and my silent noises, my salvation and my faith' - wonderful words to conclude a nicely flowing poem.