Tuesday, July 3, 2018

Ressurection Comments

Rating: 5.0

RESURRECTION

As you hold out your hand to touch me
In tune with your breath that my name doth quietly spell
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Saroj Padhi
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Khairul Ahsan 15 July 2018

An excellent poem with an appropriate title and graphic. The metaphors too are unique. I've liked this poem very much and rated it 10/10. 'You are my burns, my bruises My hymn and my silent noises, my salvation and my faith' - wonderful words to conclude a nicely flowing poem.

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Saroj Padhi 13 July 2018

my gratitude to all my esteemed readers who have appreciated this poem....THANKS POEM HUNTER

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 July 2018

Where the streaming blood sings of a new Spring, Your words in my soul Always like a sacred hymn do ring. a great poem, great wording and imagination. fine poem indeed. tony

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Saroj Padhi 13 July 2018

my gratitude n regards

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Saroj Padhi 13 July 2018

thanks and regards

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 July 2018

Your looks surround me like a python-Wonderful use of simile! Congrats for this beautiful poem being chosen as POD!

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Saroj Padhi 13 July 2018

love, gratitude n regards

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Bharati Nayak 13 July 2018

A stunning write - - - - -words of passion flow so nicely- - -Let me quote a few lines- - - - - - - You are the taste of a monsoon-soaked secret breath That stirs seeds from long Summer death You are my burns, my bruises My hymn and my silent noises, my salvation and my faith. Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day.

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Saroj Padhi 13 July 2018

thanks and regards dear poet

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Savita Tyagi 13 July 2018

Greate poem with some unique images. My bones clank like impatient Baisakhi blown temple bells....Congratulations for member poem place.

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Adrian Flett 13 July 2018

'Your looks surround me like a python' A powerful image and the link with the snake and resurrection

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Jasbir Chatterjee 13 July 2018

Congrats on being poet of the day! Quite a passionate poem, I must say, with the use of strong words like python, streaming blood, etc. Love of this sort is a scary emotion indeed...

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 July 2018

nicely penned- like to quote a stanza- Your looks surround me like a python Around a supple body at the high-tech health spa Where the streaming blood sings of a new Spring, Your words in my soul Always like a sacred hymn do ring;

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 July 2018

Saroj, such an uplifting poem of the day... congrats for being chosen....10+++++

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Gajanan Mishra 13 July 2018

silence noises, salvation point

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Robert Murray Smith 13 July 2018

A well penned write- - - - -

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