Friday, June 26, 2009

Responsibility, Accountability Comments

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I have these questions in my mind everytime that I cannot confine

Why do people suffer...
On things made by others in greed?
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Mary Joy Lumanog
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Susan Aparejo 28 June 2009

Why do people suffer... On things made by others in greed? They said it's for the better, They said it's for the best, They said it's for the future to come, to hold. For them it is indeed..but why can't they see... Sufferings they made of greed. For money is important but not it withstand Not for the future but for the benefit of a greedy man I like this stanza of your poem. Wow... you have feel the burden of greediness among men. Thanks for reading my poem. I have like this poem also title ' Global warming' but yours is so clear to express inside view of a poet. Good work!

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