Responsibility Comments

Fantastic..how well expressed the haze, the blaze, the dreamy wishful desire to fly off and float into the blue only to be brought back to earth by the squatting burden. Each word is perfectly placed and the weight is felt. Splendid...........

Fabulous. A delightful read. This is everyone's voice.10

But your burden squats on me holds me down, offers no release from here-and-now I am bound to. Beautiful diction and rhyme. Thanks for sharing the poem.10 points.