Thursday, October 22, 2009

Response To Excuse 2 (Have To Work Late) Comments

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Now, dearly beloved,
when you within my furrow sowed
your loving, fertile, squirming seed,
and it became an entity -
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Lorenzo Costigliolo
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Patti Masterman 29 October 2009

There's some startling, eclipsing imagery in here, and a feeling almost of contamination by mere reason of 2nd hand contact. Amazing how contrived our relationships can become; using the ones around us while appalled at the idea we could ever ourselves be made us of. Really stunning in every way.

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Tai Chi Italy 22 October 2009

tutting at your jealousy muse! lol I hope it feels better for the rant! lol Even greater grating...a real ouch poem, but best it is out, and remember Never believe anything you read and only half of what you see! Loving the plumbers feel in this awesomely angry poem. Smiling at you Tai

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