Friday, November 15, 2013

Response Poem To The Passionate Shepherd Comments

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You seem so charming
You seem so strong
But what you are offering is wrong
Love to you is only temporary
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Becka Rhodes
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Paul Brookes 15 November 2013

Some really good lines here but it stutters at times and some rhymes a little tenuous However you get across the story and I did enjoy it. BB: O)

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