Saturday, October 27, 2018

Respectful Freedom Is Heappiness Comments

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I will live with myself
In a self made cocoon.
There I can write
What I dream,
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Sandra Feldman
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 October 2018

A wonderful and thought provoking poem. Yes, in our own world, we can reach the unreachable. We can even claim the sky. Sometimes we need this kind of freedom to write what is in our heart. Beautifully crafted and well conveyed write.

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 27 October 2018

Being free, being imprisoned, being satisfied, being contained, happiness, worry, stress and everything else they are all in the person him/herself. Its a mental state one's own-self is responsible for. Your poem is very much thought provoking. Thanks for sharing.

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