Monday, March 12, 2012

Respect Comments

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Respect is a lesson that everyone should learn
Respect must be given before expected in return
Respect is something that comes free,
But is not easily earned
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Michael Franco
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Pari Dharawat 13 March 2012

Liked the meaning and every thing, but in poetic sense, the last line seems a little out of place. Yes the meaning is of the truest forms. May I give a suggestion for the last line, in case you do not mind? Without respect chaos takes affect so how about this - Without respect chaos brings calamity. liked poem, keep writing

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 12 March 2012

Well written, Michael Franco...Universal truth..

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