Monday, January 1, 2018

Resolutions 2018 Comments

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This Year It's all about me

I'll use sleight of hand
Be all smoke and mirrors
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David Whalen
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Bri Edwards 01 February 2018

i plan to put this into my/our MARCH 2018 'showcase', found in my list of PH poems. i give full credit (but no money!) to poets whose poems i use. if you object to my using yours or 'need' money, i'll remove the poem from the showcase after hearing from you in a message. Thanks. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 23 January 2018

favorite lines: Be honestly devious Mischievous and raw and Be honestly devious Mischievous and raw........................you, David, are a poetic gem, though an OLD one! bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 13 January 2018

the poem is very entertaining. i 'love' humor/humour. to MyPoemList. and i think i'll eventually submit the poem you've inspired..........to PH. thanks for poem (yours) and Poet's Notes. but, dagnabbit! , i didn't find any typos. there must be SOME! i won't look again. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 13 January 2018

David Whalen's New Diet: 2018 Your proposed 2018....eating habits, NOT at all like those of Br'er Rabbit's, may cause you to bloat up to HUGE! Never again will you fit in your luge! ! ! (to be continued {the comment}) .............

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Bri Edwards 13 January 2018

so.........after looking at your main page and then this one, i'd say you are closer to 80 than 103! i guess that is not your son or daughter on your knee! i hope not. are you STILL kickin'? not that you'd tell the truth! ! ! (to be continued) .................

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