Tuesday, March 22, 2016

Resignation Comments

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On the edge of a cliff,
on the edge of a night,
a dark little cabin
is edged by my light.
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Barry Middleton
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Mike Smith 22 March 2016

And with the storm at your back it may even look cozy. Loved the second stanza. Great images and description, and good use of rhyme

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Dimitrios Galanis 22 March 2016

It sounds heroic but at same time sensitive and make you feel a sadness behind it.

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Barry Middleton 22 March 2016

Acceptance of fate.

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Dimitrios Galanis 23 March 2016

This is brave and heroic, that's what I mean, Barry.

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