Resignation Comments

The beginning of the poem is so fantastic and the concluding is so touching with lofthy theme. A great poem in your pen has been amazingly shared here.

Keep your eyes open for new treasures to behold Be assured, when one is lost, several others shall unfold- - - -so much wisdom in these two lines- -We should set our sight for the future rather than bemoaning what is gone for ever and can not be retrieved.

how beautifully you have given a message in the concluding lines taking flowers as an example, , an enchanting write Be assured, when one is lost, several others shall unfold'! - SO TRUE

This can be summed up with the events of life that old withers and new shines, then why should we bother over past things rather be prepared for the new things......Valsa......nice concept with nice composition....10

I am impressed by the descriptive talent shown in this piece.Very wrong to steal but think of the pleasure that renewal will bring.

You started well with description of flower painting a beautiful picture, developed the idea smoothly gaining pace, added the some harsh taste to it in the middle that saddened the readers. But I am extremely glade to read the last part that gave hope to the readers. One other well written poem Well Done Jahan

The warmth of your dancing flowers tugs at my heart For my flower wither a fade for so the darkness is only the light that fill my days. Lovely write ~*~ Randy

In the imagery of the garden you have very vividly narrated the tale of life, the ups the downs and the trick is to enjoy the ups and have courage during the downs. Life is an garden, dig it. Very refreshing M'aam.

A dramatic and positive poem beautifully structured

Today the xmas day, read this poem with some pride, Godly day made me to read, again and again I felt calmfull emotion on this lovable poem..... While I stood admiring them in rising ecstasy The passersby looked at them in growing jealousy The poetess fly beyond sky to..... Keep your eyes open for new treasures to behold Best wishes for more to read

a great poem valsa, , , especially the ending, , , , , it was so great, , , , , and powerful, , , , , and also the similis used for magnificient

Wow, this is a wonderful poem. I love the way the flowers are described, one can feel the beauty, then the heartache of of the destruction and then the fantastic wisdom that follows. It made me think of the poem, eternity by William Blake: He who binds to himself a joy Does the winged life destroy; But he who kisses the joy as it flies Lives in eternity's sun rise. We have indeed to kiss the joy as it flies and as you said, every day has its own new blessings

Ahhh such a beautiful, meaningful....Who am i to tell about poetry, i have no qualification or quality to tell about someone else poem what the best but i do know what is the best in writing when i read it, i think you having it..._Soul

The beautiful imagery of the flowers in bloom with music flowing throughout the spirited write with rhyme and rhythm in tact captured my heart. The philosophical touch at the end makes the poem complete in all respects.I can easily compare you with the Nature Poet -Wordsworth-and can even say you have overtaken him. KUDOS.

So vivid and unique description! Loved.

As there are times to signify the flowers to be re bloomed, these phased concerns will fade away and the ultimate speech by the inner self ought to be strong enough to solace a poet of your stand. The plucked flowers can`t any more be a painful memory as you begin to look around your gardens awaiting a spring.

Beautifully written poem Valsa - I don't like to see flowers plucked from their stems either, they should be left to dance under the sun. Good philosophy though, no use crying over spilt milk they say.

the dancing flowers with rhyme and rhythm of your words enchanted me to dance with them and the ending with a strong and practical philosophy of life gives this a universal appeal....

the dancing flowers with rhyme and rhythm of your words enchanted me to dance with them and the ending with a strong and practical philosophy of life gives this a universal appeal....