Tuesday, March 3, 2015

Residence Comments

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Birds live in a nest,
It is for them always best.

Sheep live in a pen,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Edward Kofi Louis 27 July 2019

Humanity! ! Earth is our residence. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 13 September 2015

Everyone likes own residence, Thanks to God, all have obedience. When living matter learnt the art of making a residence that was the first day of civilization. great poem.............10

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Roseann Shawiak 08 March 2015

A very light write with a brief description of where each animal you mention lives. Yes, God does have quite an imagination to think of so many different types of animals, insects, rodents, etc. As I read this poem, I thought, wow! this is a perfect poem for children to learn from. Very simple and direct education for them. Thank you, RoseAnn

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Smooth write...Eye pleasing read...Closing line says it all ~FjR~

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 03 March 2015

As usual, well rhymed simple observations!

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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