Tuesday, August 18, 2009

Reservoirs Of Fire Comments

Rating: 5.0

Daunted am I
by the pyramids
which spring up
all around me;
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leonard daranjo
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Sandra Fowler 18 August 2009

A very powerful, introspective write. I like your resolve to cling to what is honorable and true. Even though, as you say, you are cynical. This is a fascinating paradox. The first two stanzas stand out to me. Strength for the journey, my friend.10/10. Warmest regards, Sandra i

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