Saturday, March 22, 2014

Reservations And Hesitations Comments

Rating: 5.0

I should've put in on the table
Thought I had it figured out
Should've took the chance when able
Now I have to do without
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Susan Lacovara
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Raymond Farrell 14 June 2015

We've all been through this sort of thing in our lives but the word play in this poem does an incredible job of elevating the matter to a true work of art. Great write.

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Roseann Shawiak 22 March 2014

Liked this poem, reminds me of driving across country aimlessly many times when younger. Good memories you've brought to the foreground. Identify with the ifs, would's and could's also. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Roseann Shawiak 22 March 2014

Liked this poem, reminds me of myself many times over the years, driving aimlessly across country. Good memories you've brought to the foreground. Identify with the ifs, would's and could haves, also. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Savita Tyagi 22 March 2014

This is really wonderful. We all living with our ifs and woulds, and coulds. Time to time trying to dump them by road side. Very creative poem.

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Jemima Rivas 22 March 2014

awww this is very good work it parallels driving whit relationships who would have taught of it beautiful write tnx

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Colleen Courtney 22 March 2014

Wow! This is so very creative! Love it!

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Susan Lacovara

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