Thursday, June 28, 2012

Resentment As The End Comments

Rating: 5.0

When they had rid themselves of their first scapegoat
To send their problems away with it,
It came back as the demon Azazel.
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Gabhriel Londe
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Colin Bradley 31 March 2013

A powerfull emotional write

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Kelly Seale 17 October 2012

Gabhriel, This piece game me great pause- the world, in all it's madness, can create the worst in us. The resentment can give-way to forgiveness, if we are made aware in time... And in that forgiveness, the heart opens up and allows in, the most powerful thing on earth- Love. _A magnificent write, Resentment as the End This is without a doubt, Great Ink! ; -) -Kelly.

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Romeo Della Valle 30 September 2012

The mind and heart have spoken and shown through this well penned write that in this World there is Good and Evil in every area of life! Like I said in one of my recent posted poems: Your action in life gives you away! This a very interesting and thought provoking write that shows you talent! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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Karen Sinclair 30 June 2012

Interesting as i intitally assumed, relationship...but then realised this was much broader than that..i dont think man could really get any worse ... i just think its more a case of delving for the extremities in humanity...great piece of thought provocation...tyvm karen

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Gabhriel Londe

Gabhriel Londe

Joplin, Missouri
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