Monday, April 29, 2013
Resentment Comments
Rating: ★3.5
These raised voices I've heard far to much
Deafening screams forces me to reject your touch
False allegations that I'm the one to blame
False intentions that trigger off my pain
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Gajanan Mishra
29 April 2013
that's all your loves brings. good write. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
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7/24/2025 11:02:12 PM # 1.0.0
Hi, I like the first line alot. first lines are very important, they tend to guide the poem I think. your lowercase i's take away from poem, they distract. but good poem, I like it. take care