Disconnected from reality,
My heart fades into the abysmal darkness,
Drifting endlessly through a pool of misery
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Wow. I gave this one a 10, my friend. I like the inner depth of your lines, and how you can analyze this to the core, and still get something different, yet great about it. Great job! The work of a true poet. Be Different. Be You. Elizabeth
Nice, dark, mysterious... I LUV IT! ! ! !