Monday, May 20, 2013

Rescuing Me Comments

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Submerged in an ocean
Of pure misery
My hand and feet were bound
And I could barely breath
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Alla Simone 25 May 2013

Kicking and thrashing to the surface The waves refusing to let go Wondering how I'd got here Questioning how I let myself sink so low Washing up on shore that night Gasping, and choking After near burial at sea Looking back on it now I saw only a mysterious figure But I know exactly who rescued me Ending is my fav part. Im one who ALWAYS fights my rescuer so I def appreciate them for taking the abuse later. I not only know, but highly value them for future reference.

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Aria Siren 21 May 2013

When I look back at different times I've been rescued (usually from myself) I never forget the people who lifted me up and dusted me off. They'll always have a special place in your life. Nice subject matter, excellent metaphor and sweet ending.

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