Saturday, December 8, 2007

Rescue Comments

Rating: 5.0

Trees spread in me- leaves of velvety green.
Flowers flourish my eyes, like stars in the sky.
Grass fleshing out under my toes- my heart composed.
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Jodilee Duke
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Dark Soul 09 December 2007

First the poem is amazing, full of a beatufull description for life and nature simplicity, plus well done wrote in a wonderful way that made me feel every single word, i also find no word in the poem lead to any implusive meaning which makes me feel weird for Mr Yoonoos comment but any way its a free speech here, i really loved your poem and enjoyed it, well done jodilee DS

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