Monday, November 14, 2016

Requiem To Rebirth Comments

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White temple tall I stand.
As lips apart, the doors are open
To all Faiths. The organ swells
The pipes both red and blue
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Tom Billsborough
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Liza Sudina 16 November 2016

Wow! wonderful! I am impressed by such new vision! I am an empty building, void in silence Unless I drink you in, my love, O my superior essence.

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Tom Billsborough 16 November 2016

Thanks, Liza. must say you handle English very well. I sometimes write poems in French myself, usually funny ones about my cat!

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Tom Billsborough

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