Requiem For Tillie Comments

2 – i like the poem quite a bit, but am sure(?) i don't follow some of the events, and i don't wish to ponder too much, nor ask for explanations. too busy here! ha ha. bri :)

1 - " changeling" : " a child believed to have been secretly substituted by fairies for the parents' real child in infancy." but..." wean" as a noun? ? an Irish slang for child? stanza 3, line 1: " its" , not " it's" ? ;) & line 7: " in deed" or " indeed" ? So, Tillie's final pleasure is being dead (done quietly) ?

A great write.... Keep it up... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too. Naila

0525am,25 March 2018. Barney, today I will light a candle for Tillie, this being Palm Sunday.