Thursday, March 22, 2012

Requiem~~an Ode To Time Comments

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Time moves forward,  without stopping
And fastened on her shoulders, bind our existence.
Aged and tired slowly we saunter her
Most are left behind, diminishing in the distance.
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Besa Dede
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Indira Babbellapati 30 March 2012

time, a master-crafter... time is like a rubber-band...stretch it and leave, it hits us hard!

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Ken E Hall 27 March 2012

Good poem and original look at ageing...you know, ageing is a battle I'm retired extremely fit its a fight against wearing out My wife and I do Ballroom dancing. yoga eat healthy and believe me Besa it is wonderful to be like that in retirement after working hard it makes sense, thats my Requiem! regards

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Roxy Del Mar 24 March 2012

Very powerful imagery and very creative use thereof! :) I like it a lot.

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R.k Das 23 March 2012

Time the greatest leveller, , ,

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