Requiem Comments

'Naked nerve endings, feel the bare of my skin, My dearly departed, you hath stolen my Crimson essence, and only in death shall it be shared with me again. ' With these lines you certainly in tug of with Emily Dickensen in expressing grief of missing something or somebody. This poem is wholesome much above the level of 16 year old Teenager. Wow! Awesome performance as poet.Best of Luck......10++++++++++++++++++

I love the depth of the dark pain within this. 'This masochistic pleasure I enjoy, as long as my pain is caused by you, I will always be complete'. Love that line because to me it states that when someone you love dies, you kind of enjoy the pain because it reminds you that they were here; that they truly existed.