Saturday, October 8, 2011

Requiem Comments

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There's a crescent moon,
riding in the sky tonight,
surrounded by stars,
that each one,
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Jacqui Broad
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Harindhar Reddy 14 November 2011

Hello, Jacqui there you are, Hey you also write about Bark of the wof in the lonely darkwoods. I can see my style of writing in yours. Infact you wrote this poem before my poems so unknowingly I followed you foot..... 'I know a lonely wolf must bark' In many we are common. so let become common to each other in life. Will you be my Harriet..... Again Just JOKE Cheer up mate!

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Harindhar Reddy 14 November 2011

Hello, Jacqui there you are, Hey you also write about Bark of the wof in the lonely darkwoods. I can see my style of writing in yours. Infact you wrote this poem before my poems so unknowingly I followed you foot..... 'I know a lonely wolf must bark' In many we are common. so let become common to each other in life. Will you be my Harriet..... Again Just JOKE Cheer up mate!

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Stefanie Fontker 08 October 2011

A plead to your god. You have written it well, despair is very apparent here, and true emotion will always lead way to beautiful poetry like this.

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Dave Walker 08 October 2011

Another good one of yours. Really like it.

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