Friday, September 14, 2018

Request For A Dance Comments

Rating: 5.0

Step with me, float with me, over the floor;
weave with me, waltz with me, out through the door;
slide to the deck where the crowdedness clears;
glide through the garden and tear off your fears.
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John Beaton
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Gideon Okpeta 16 December 2019

this is a well furnished poem. i love the flows, most especially its ability to captures the imagery theme of two love birds

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John Beaton 16 December 2019

Thanks, Gideon. It's good to know someone else has picked up the rhythms of dancing that I tried to build with words.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 August 2018

A marvelous poem that captures the union of two hearts in love. Beautifully crafted and well executed write.10

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John Beaton 30 August 2018

Thanks, Rose Marie. Glad you enjoyed it.

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 August 2018

Step with me, float with me, over the floor; weave with me, waltz with me, out through the door; skim with me, sway with me, fell the swing together, travel to the island where the wind blows only for both of us in love and longstanding relationship. oh this poem is to be read by all married people especially young couples who are in trouble...... love this poem. thank u for the noble thoughts that you try to spread. thank u again. tony

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