Repulsive Blow Comments

a bit archaic and challenging... i cdnt get the focal point...but creative writing is like that, by nature...the poet says his mind and the commentator...goes any which way... you have a way with words...and its evident you have great potential cheers

You are a deep and well thinker Uzma! ! it is hard for me to approach somewhere! ! 10..

hi shonu nice poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !