Friday, June 12, 2015

Republic Lines... Comments

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Colour my heart with patriotism,
A new India starts today...
With joyous pray
AS it is republic day
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Susan Williams 18 September 2020

WE fled injustice out of our country Look at everyone's face with glee- - it is enlightening to see how many people are alike only living in different countries!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 January 2019

VERY PATRIOTIC POETRY COMING FROM A GIRL JUST 19 DID YOU START COMPOSING WHEN YOU WERE 11

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 April 2016

Nice one... we are republican country...10 We have inferior political class And uneducated mass But still as infant democracy We are republican country

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Gauri Vyas 31 July 2015

Thank u Lyn Payl and everyone who thought that this poem is powerful..

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Lyn Paul 18 July 2015

Wonderful to see such dedication. Let justice be there for everyone. Thank You

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Allotey Abossey 15 June 2015

Selfless people fight for good things for a country but greedy people come to hoard the good for their selfish gains. But a new dawn is coming. Thanks for sharing

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Shivangi Vyas 15 June 2015

god really got patriotic after reading this poem..! ! ! really gr88 lines gauri...! ! ! god bless u always

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Kelly Kurt 12 June 2015

More than a billion people are with you on this, Gauri. Thanks for sharing

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Gauri Vyas 13 June 2015

thank you so much!

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Rajnish Manga 12 June 2015

Thanks for invoking the spirit of our great Republic though, we had to pay its price both before and after it materialised. Great poem.

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