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Having passed fifty years with you
I now agree with you.
I regret why I couldn't reply only Shoo.
Perhaps I loved you
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Read this poem earlier and commented on it. Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'! 'the teller of lies has now become a writer of lies! ' - apparently scornful, yet, like some other readers, I too can see some love in the poem for the 'writer of lies'.
Such a sad realization of reality and truth. Hoping for a shining star showing you the path to happiness. Congrats for POD.
Another shower another day. I really do feel clean after a wash. Now, what was I thinking about?
But the only difference I see in you, Meaningful the teller of lies has now become a writer of lies!
Perhaps I loved you/and I still love you.......I considerably fail to measure the depth of love expressed here! Many congratulations for this sweet poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!
Congrats on being poet of the day! A liar has become a writer of lies...Interesting lines tinged with a dash of bitterness...Well, a fiction writer does have to make up a lot of things, but the person needn't be a liar in real life...
A blue-chip poem of the day, Bano. Congrats for being chosen..10+++++++++++
wow pure love is alive long- Perhaps I loved you and I still love you /// beautiful poem
'Perhaps I loved you and I still love you. But the only difference I see in you, the teller of lies has now become a writer of lies! ' - Ha ha ha! So wonderfully said!
Nice short marital poem. Does it mean the husband writes lies? Thumbs up. Hope to read more from u. Pls do leave your thoughts comment on my latest poem too, titled, 'To stand tall and proud yet to humbly bow'
Seems satisfied marital life and love are experienced by the writer. Thanks
This is beautiful. Shows you have a blessed life with mutual respect and love. Loved the way you expressed it.
Shoo & Jawab-e-shoo shows the extent of mutual respect and understanding between the King and the Queen of Heart. Great expression. Thanks.
I love this reply, but my lies are more beautiful than the ugly truths.
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badi muddat kay baad aaj yaad ayah woh zamana SHAKILA bANO NEY KAHA EK PHARMANA WOH AYEY HAI DAIR SEY PAR AYAY HAIN DRUST UNKAY LIYE ABH KAHENGAY DOE CHAAR NAZMEINN ZARROR hoe kay muzboor AND SHE SAT DOWN AGAIN IN MY HONOUR FIFTY YEARS gone down memory lane