Lies are misshappened truths
Intended to convert others to their view.
The prize be to destroy facts
As they shed false teardrops, anew.
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I can't work out if you're agreeing with my sonnet, or not, Sidi. Until halfway down I thought you were merely paraphasing my work, but then...? A strange echo, yet a gnawing suspicion that you're saying that the thoughtful approach is a fool's paradise. Perhaps it is. Interested to know your rationale, in plain words? Best wishes. jack :)
Today, as I came back to read your poems after a long time... I just ran into this one. It has a different flair.. at first I thought it was a psychological analysis of thoughts and beyond...... and I went on to read it again... there is something I felt was different.... it is very thought provoking. In short - I actually did like it.