Repention Song Comments

Very inspiring.But I personally feel that the Soul is always pure in spirit since it connects us with the Deity, by what name we choose, whether we acknowledge the existence or not.And we sin because we don't know any better or because it's the only means to an end.All is forgiven when we give up our last breath and how we live our lives is what is important.Death is the great equaliser and no one really knows what happens in the after-life but it must be a good place because they don't back except for some who return to haunt as ghosts in limbo or reincarnated purified souls (Buddhist/Hindu) .Depends on religious belief. Your poems are very clearly written.You do have some typos but don't we all? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Tens for all and keep writng-can't wait to hear your songs some day.

Nice poem. Good job.