Friday, July 29, 2011

Repeling Comments

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Magnets atracting and pushing...
I am a Monet
from a distance i look amazing
but in close i'm nasty dots like childs play...
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Dennis That Lil' Menace
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Stefanie Fontker 04 August 2011

Mr. Rathbone down there made me laugh, and I will say I caught your spelling mistakes as well, but otherwise this is a great poem. I hope to see more from you.

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Dennis that Menace 29 July 2011

I did this as a tribute to a poem called magnets by a girl Meagan (Emo) White

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Dennis that Menace 29 July 2011

Nope is as written sir

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Mike Rathbone 29 July 2011

should it be repelling, noxious, too bad.?

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