Thursday, October 5, 2017

Repeating Day And Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a cycle that completes,
Whole day and night forms,
Togetherness is the power,
Beauty is in shade and light.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

Day and night both are reflected in a cycle. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 September 2018

A great perception on life. Very insightful and well crafted write. Liked the first stanza.10+++

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Rebecca Navarre 20 November 2017

Ever Such Beautiful Wisdom Shown! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Shines Like A Beautiful Radiant Light! ! ! ! ! And Is Ever So Precious To Our Sight! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++......

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 October 2017

Challenges of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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