Repayment Of A Rib Comments

A thought provoking poem intelligently penned. A stark reality on the effect of poverty. Loans are greedy achemes of businessmen that instead of helping the people to be freed from the claws of poverty, they are driving them into deeper holes. An insightful piece.10

butterflies kissed the pollen grains fruits scattered their seeds all over the soil world became a forest.....fascinating expression! Very nicely penned....thanks for sharing....10

It's a great poem on this special day for women.

butterflies kissed the pollen grains fruits scattered their seeds all over the soil world became a forest but the Eve is still repaying the compound interests of a rib, while the principal is still standing as a rock! ......I find here a theme with happiness and sadness, the picture too touches the heart. Beautifully inscribed.