'God you're grey! '
My rival said.
(I'd taken his favourite
Girl to bed) .
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! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I love this LOTS! Words, thought, attitude, action... As for repartee, same thing here: so often, the right words, the PERFECT words, come minutes/hours too late. I think, however, you're one up on him anyway.
Quite a uhm er, clever little poem. -chuck