Saturday, September 14, 2013

Renewing Nature Comments

Rating: 5.0

The rain gently falls

flooding the valleys nearby
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Heather Burns
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Sallam Yassin 19 September 2013

that grace of upper heaven intermingled with grace of lower earth so the life renewed in nature so sweet and brief

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Tribhawan Kaul 15 September 2013

Yes, rains bring life to the nature. Love senryu

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Sekharan Pookkat 14 September 2013

Little raindrops blush soil to blossom again

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Dave Walker 14 September 2013

The rain can be a beautiful thing, a great poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 14 September 2013

Beautiful description Heather..loved reading it.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 14 September 2013

Heather nice senryu so nice description of rain and the property of revivalism I call it burst thank you beautiful so beautiful I can't compose such Senryu just learning from you

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