Sunday, April 6, 2008

Renewal Of Pledge Comments

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You may have memories
Of our last meeting at River Indus.
standing on the west bank,
I held your hand
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Wali Jamali
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Ayþegül Sarýkaya 28 December 2008

I don't know Indus but your words draw the picture of the Indus and your deep love...

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Sadiqullah Khan 07 December 2008

Those who have seen indus will understand the ebauty of this poem, , nice thought, ,10

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So you can never love me the way you love your brother Tom? ? Only thing that I remember was standing by Floss while he held my hand and everything before that is dark to me! ! ! [Mill on the Floss] Murky manna of Sindhu maligned yet lusted after Tnnx Ms Jamali

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 20 April 2008

the vows by the river bank......holy and sacred...........pierce the heart...........good work

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C.Rose Hamby 10 April 2008

Ouch! That is something a girl in love doesn't want to hear. I get the spiritual beauty of the poem though.

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